My Plans For My Holiday
Talk about my plans for holiday, in fact I have so many places I want to go. Many beautiful place in the world, but first if I can, I want to visit Japan or South Korean. I choose them because Japan and South Korean are located in Asia, so there are close by Indonesia.
From travelling I can understand diverification, culture, habit, and many more. But, not only from other countries we can find beautiful places. Indonesia also have many beautiful places, in fact Indonesia have 3 beach as present the most beautiful beach in the world.

BalasHapusin fact(,)P I have so many places I want to go.
Many beautiful place# in the world (places)
Yes Qirani.. . I agree with you
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BalasHapusMaybe you can change "in fact" into "actually" and put it on the last sentence
BalasHapusthank you for your comment :)
BalasHapusHello Gita... According to me in your statement "in fact Indonesia have 3 beach" is less precise and the right statement is "actually Indonesia have 3 beachs"...
BalasHapushallo sis ,I visit your blog after you are comment in my blog ^^
BalasHapusDon't you think if Singapore or Malaysia is more close by indonesia ? haha i'm just joke it's your dream right ;) I hope that someday your dream became true and if you don't mind maybe we can go holiday in korea together someday ^^